Organization’s security policy readiness
Identity the elements of a security policy and describe how those elements protect against such an attack
Ransomware attack examples (you need to provide more depth in your responses to show thoroughly understand the concepts. More critical analysis and insight is needed)
You need to address the lesson learned from the examples that you provided in the review of the security policies and the impacts if not implemented.
Examples you provided are not deep. You just give a high level. You need to do more analysis and insights in addition to more original words.
It seems to me that each paragraph goes way from the paragraph before, there is no link its like jumping between subjects. Also, you need to provide more depth in each example as well as the organization’s security policy elements to show thoroughly understand the concepts. More critical analysis and insight is needed throughout the paper. More original thought also needed.