Statement of Purpose editing

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Graduate Statement of Purpose (my draft is attached) I’m applying for aerospace engineering, but the technical portions of my essay only mention instability failure relating to mechanical engineering. I’m worried the technical aspects of my essay are too vague, or not entirely correct. I would also like my essay to be reviewed to improve the readability, analyze the overall effectiveness, and improve narrative flow.

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